Evaluation: Conventions analysis

Evaluation: Conventions

Peer feedback

Front cover draft

After feedback there are few things that i realise i should change. For exaple, i need to make the masthead bigger so it fits accross the top of the page so there is no gap. I  also need to move the main feature article down and move the plug up towards the masthead. I also need to move the featuring and exclusive articles down a little bit. I hopee with these adjustments that i will be happy with my final front cover.

Double page spread draft 2

Improvements needed for second double page spread draft

After looking at my double page spread first draft i know that there are some things which i need to change to make it look better and more professional. These are:
*Make the font size 11pt as this is used in many other magazines.
*Maybe make the article longer
*Add another image on the right hand side below the text to make it less basic (Put it on a side so it looks more different)
*Change the sentence layout so words dont drag below to the next line
*Change the font type of the introduction to something more striking and eye catching

Double page-spread draft 1

This is my first double page spread draft, i have used a continous colour scheme in my double page spread and the colours used reflect my genre. After feedback i realise the changes that i need to make, i need to change the font i have used on my pull quote and introduction to one that reflects my genre. I need to make the article smaller font and then make it longer. Also add a picture on the page so it isnt just tect to break it up. I do like my first draft and i like the layout of it and the overall house style.